tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post6029683962722960231..comments2023-11-05T04:09:53.857-05:00Comments on Something Short and Snappy: 50 Shades of Grey Chapter 18 in which there is lots of banging :)Erika The Over Queenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03649072707709302370noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-17086529079471618942014-02-11T11:47:12.797-05:002014-02-11T11:47:12.797-05:00ANNA PEEL!!!!! That is beyond Epic!ANNA PEEL!!!!! That is beyond Epic!TexasGalnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-40029112133207871542013-10-08T22:31:44.338-04:002013-10-08T22:31:44.338-04:00Who does that!!!!Who does that!!!!Priscilla Fumeronoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-23457030742620425622013-10-08T22:31:16.407-04:002013-10-08T22:31:16.407-04:00RULES
Obedience: The Submissive will obey any ins...RULES<br /><br />Obedience: The Submissive will obey any instructions given by the Dominant immediately without hesitation or reservation and in an expeditious manner. The Submissive will agree to any sexual activity deemed fit and pleasurable by the Dominant excepting those activities that are outlined in hard limits (Appendix 2). She will do eagerly and without hesitation. <br /><br />Sleep: The Submissive will ensure she achieves a minimum of seven hours' a night when she is not with the Dominant.<br /><br />Food: The Submissive will eat regularly to maintain her health and well-being from a prescribed list of foods. (Appendix 4). The Submissive will not snack between meals, with the exception of fruit.<br /><br />Clothes: during the Term, the Submissive will wear clothing only approved by the Dominant. The Dominant will provide a clothing budget for the Submissive, which the Submissive shall utilize. The Dominant shall accompany the Submissive to purchase clothing on an ad hoc basis. If the Dominant so requires, the Submissive shall wear during the Term any adornments the Dominant shall require, in the presence of the Dominant and at any other time the Dominant deems fit.<br /><br />Exercise: The Dominant shall provide the Submissive with a personal trainer four times a week in hour-long sessions at times to mutually agreed between the personal trainer and the Submissive. The personal trainer will to the Dominant on the Submissive's progress. <br /><br />Personal Hygiene/Beauty: The Submissive will keep clean and shaved and/or waxed at all times. The Submissive will visit a beauty salon of the Dominant's choosing at times to be decided by the Dominant and undergo whatever treatments the Dominant sees fits.<br /><br />Personal Safety: The Submissive will not drink to excess, smoke, take recreational drugs, or put herself in any unnecessary danger.<br /><br />Personal Qualities: The Submissive will not enter into any sexual relations with anyone other than the Dominant. The Submissive will conduct herself in a respectful and modest manner at all times. She must recognize that her behavior is a direct reflection on the Dominant. She shall be held accountable for any misdeeds, wrongdoing, and misbehavior committed when not in the presence of the Dominant. <br /><br />Failure to comply with any of the result in immediate punishment, the nature of which shall be determined by the Dominant. <br /><br />Christian and Anastasia are discussing and making deals and then Christian hands her another piece of paper (another contract) a list of Hard Limits. <br /><br />HARD LIMITS<br /><br />No acts involving fire play.<br />Not acts involving urination or defection and the products thereof.<br />No acts involving needles, knives, piercing, or blood.<br />No acts involving gynecological medical instruments.<br />No acts involving children or animals. <br />No acts that will leave any permanent marks on the skin.<br />No acts involving breath control.<br />No activity that involves the direct contract of the electric current (whether alternating or direct), fire, or flames to the body.Priscilla Fumeronoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-34325816930921557542013-10-08T16:55:55.658-04:002013-10-08T16:55:55.658-04:00By the way, I can't wait for the movie coz Cha...By the way, I can't wait for the movie coz Charlie Hunnam is playing Christian Grey AaaaahhhPriscilla Fumeronoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-5404084800168487822013-10-08T16:54:34.985-04:002013-10-08T16:54:34.985-04:00what is that mean anyway? My inner goddess please....what is that mean anyway? My inner goddess please. Anastasia Steele is a dumbass who lets Christian Grey control her, abuse her, and she chooses to be Christian's sex slave.Priscilla Fumeronoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-91880345206997290322013-10-08T16:50:24.405-04:002013-10-08T16:50:24.405-04:00And my inner goddess thatAnd my inner goddess thatPriscilla Fumeronoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-3751508848762419372013-07-04T12:32:09.627-04:002013-07-04T12:32:09.627-04:00So this author http://jennytrout.blogspot.com/p/je...So this author http://jennytrout.blogspot.com/p/jen-reads-50-shades-of-grey.html who is also doing 50-shades re-caps (she's totally awesome by the way, check her out, also she is into BDSM) has this theory that Ana is purposely starving herself when with Grey, because it's the only thing she has control over in her abusive relationship. I totally agree.<br />Awesome, as always. =)Thea Knoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-15744192846327385452013-01-03T12:11:05.257-05:002013-01-03T12:11:05.257-05:00I don't understand why female characters crapp...I don't understand why female characters crappy novels and fanfictions always have insane orgasms from even just foreplay. I know that there are women like that out there but given the many conversations I've had with my friends, very few actually get orgasms from penetration and some can't even get it from clitoral stimuli. It really irks me.caitlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00967406858173235439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-74082124735349170282012-09-06T22:08:35.000-04:002012-09-06T22:08:35.000-04:00From what I understand, there are a great many cra...From what I understand, there are a great many craftspeople in the BDSM community, so it would not be unheard of for Mr. Grey to have commissioned the various things in his Red Room and have them installed to create such a place. It would be fantastically expensive, of course, but he has more money than Bill Gates, so its a simple expense for him.<br /><br />Also, he has no idea how to use a riding crop, from that same understanding. They're supposed to be very stingy.<br /><br />That said, this is a chapter where it all feels believable, at least, so we're making progress. I think.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-40257644791727369652012-09-06T11:03:24.811-04:002012-09-06T11:03:24.811-04:00I am concerned by the amount of IKEA sex that seem...I am concerned by the amount of IKEA sex that seems to be in this chapter. That's a fan fiction problem that carried over I guess.I was wondering about why she didn't just set it in London. There are waay too many Britishisms and that's just from your quotes. Who was her editor? Why didn't she catch it?<br /><br />I remember in one of Neil Gaiman's books, I wanna say American Gods, maybe, anyway he said he had to give his book to his American friends to read even before submitting it to publishers because it was the first book he had set in the US and he wanted it to seem authentic so his friends had to weed out anything alien sounding in it. Of course he is an actual author with you know, talent and what not so I guess James didn't care enough to do that.Maleficentnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-46037216817651492862012-09-05T10:08:37.257-04:002012-09-05T10:08:37.257-04:00Oh you are so welcome!! I do get a kick when, ever...Oh you are so welcome!! I do get a kick when, everytime, I try to comment, I get that funny little message "Please prove you are not a robot" and I have to write down a stupid word and number, which I quite often get wrong because its blurry as hell lolMilouhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17922774508021373013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-72645098208123802752012-09-05T09:04:09.960-04:002012-09-05T09:04:09.960-04:00After this deconstruction, I really, really want t...After this deconstruction, I really, really want to read a description of Ana eating a sandwich.YMMVnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-17722068319435220952012-09-04T17:17:43.339-04:002012-09-04T17:17:43.339-04:00I don't know why my spam filter hates you but ...I don't know why my spam filter hates you but it is convinced you are a robot. They ping to email first, so I know now when I see your comment hit the e-mail to check the spam folder at least. I wish I knew how to just "white list" some people as there are a few of the regular commentator who it just does not like. :/<br /><br />I do see all of your comments, though, and they often give me warm fuzzy feelings, so thanks for persisting in posting them when you weren't even sure I was seeing them. Erihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122553313316730582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-6118315993602945282012-09-04T15:39:26.935-04:002012-09-04T15:39:26.935-04:00“Are you going to hit me?”
“Yes, but it won’t be t...“Are you going to hit me?”<br />“Yes, but it won’t be to hurt you. I don’t want to punish you right now. If you’d caught me yesterday evening, well, that would have been a different story.”<br />Holy cow. He wants to hurt me… how do I deal with this? I can’t hide the horror on my face.<br /><br />This is absolutely terrifying. They cannot keep describing whatever it is they're doing by saying "hitting". Hitting someone is absuing someone. Granted, he is abusing her on every level, but she is somewhat agreeing to it. But seriously, him saying " I will hit you, just not to hurt you." Is fifty fucking shades of wrong. (Oh how I wish I never said that again.)<br /><br />I also very deeply hate any expression starting with HOLY now. We see it way too many times. And the inner goddess? I wish i could drown her, but then again, I'm kind of a... harpy? lol <br /><br />Great job as always :)Milouhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17922774508021373013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-27718017239711907612012-09-04T15:00:32.004-04:002012-09-04T15:00:32.004-04:00Oh before i start reading that awesome post (so fo...Oh before i start reading that awesome post (so forgot on Tuesdays I get more posts :) It seems that once again my comments are not showing. It doesn't really matter, as long as you know I'm reading and enjoying every bit of it!Milouhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17922774508021373013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2946534773407276339.post-17775302886168131442012-09-04T13:51:39.738-04:002012-09-04T13:51:39.738-04:00“When I tell you to come in here, I expect you to ...<strong>“When I tell you to come in here, I expect you to kneel over there.”<br />“You can sit back on your heels.”<br />“Place your hands and forearms flat on your thighs. Good. Now part your knees. Wider. Wider. Perfect. Look down at the floor.”</strong><br /><br /><em>It took me a few tries to position her in my head. The hands and forearms flat on her legs is the part that sounds most hurty to me.</em><br /><br />Hmm...<br />After a few tries, I think it depends on exactly what he means by sitting back on heels. A slight change in leg positioning makes the difference between flat forearms being very easy and very hard.<br /><br /><em>I stand by my same concern over sanitation with this thing that I had during the dream sequence. </em><br /><br />Would they be having sex if they were particularly concerned about sanitary?<br /><br /><em>Ana shatters/quakes/explodes "gloriously" as she does every time she comes</em><br /><br /><strong>I feel the build up again. Jeez no… not again… I don’t think my body will withstand another earth-shattering moment. But I have no choice… and with an inevitability that’s becoming familiar, I let go and come again, and it’s sweet and agonizing and intense.</strong><br /><br />I'm starting to wonder if it's actually possible to describe orgasms in a positive way. I know this is far from the most well-written thing ever, but <em>every</em> description of an orgasm I have ever read evoked pity rather than jealousy.Brinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18034585577015417306noreply@blogger.com